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©2006-2009 ~melukilan
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Another class assignment, this one to illustrate a poem that was handed out. I very nearly ruined this painting, but I think I saved it with the application of more intense color and the sharpie outlines. It's a look I rather like.
I think the guy's jaw is too pale, though, and the steering wheel in the lower left corner looks like nothing in particular.

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:icontouch-of-insanity:
i like it. maybe outlinig the steering wheel will help?

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I really like the colors and expression of the faces. The color of the jaw doesn't disturbs me, I rather like the way it seems the sun comes through the windows and lights some parts of the face.

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:iconjowo:
wow! this is cool! I love this kind of illustrations. You've got a great style! :clap:

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:iconshirubi:
great job on this :D

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like a porcelin doll she breaks and shatters into a million pieces
:iconmighterbump:
Cool. Very Nice. Sharpies can give off a intense and rush feeling. Sense Sharpies are one time application with a less likely chance of fixing(white-out) it's a good way to level up on dexterity, but this is nice~.

While consistency is grand, when it comes to taking it from real life there is a illusion of it. For all I know, there could be a car in the opposite lane about to pass by the car so the headlights of that car are making his jaw seem shades lighter.

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:iconmpeacecraft:
Just because I'm a curious person... What poem was this based on?

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:iconelbenlady-elanor:
Love this mass of skin tones in his face. Really great! :)
:iconunshakentomato:
Great narrative in this work. The colors keep it all together but the composition and the expression on both character's faces (particularly his) add layers of depth. I keep wondering exactly what he's thinking, and expecting some sort of comic series to explain it.

I also wonder what poem you illustrated, and whether you could post it.

Congrats, and keep up the nice work.
:iconmilosmilos:
Great idea, nice handling with watercolors.

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November 13, 2006
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